“We are so busted.’
“We’re not gonna get caught. Unless you give us away with your ‘Guilty as charged’ look. Think about clouds – anything. Wipe that expression off your face.”
“I can’t help it. I’ve never used a fake ID and snuck into a bar before.’
“Shh! Why don’t you broadcast that a little louder? I don’t think the cops heard you.”
“This is so lame. I can’t believe you talked me into this.”
“I can’t believe I brought you. Do you ever loosen up?”
“I’m a fun person. I just get a little uptight when my BFF makes me do something wacked.”
“Oh my God, that guy is so hot.”
“FOCUS”
“I’m focu– oh my God, did you see that girl’s shoes?”
“My parents are not gonna let me out of their sight after tonight.”
“Relax! Sheesh. Such a killjoy.”
“Are you seriously ordering another martini?? We are so dead.”
“You have money, right?”
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Ooh that takes me back! Great SC :o)
This was great…sneaky teens…so true to life, very well written !
The dialogue really moves this little story along. It was seamless!
Namaste………cj
Great conversation. I can hear the teens talking as I read this. Very well done.
Hmm–this conversation sounds vaguely familiar. I think I know you!!!!!
hahaha. I have to say, I was a goody two shoes growing up, so that would have been me. loved the last line.
Unfortunately, I was one of those good girls that never used a fake id LOL. This was a really neat take on the prompt.
Sometimes it stinks to be the “responsible” one, doesn’t it? Love the dialogue, it rang really true – especially the shoe remark LOL Great job