Blog-a-thon 2008

Blog-a-thon ’08: Welcome Home [4]

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This an ongoing story that I’m posting over the next several hours. Though I have an idea what I want to write, it’s not written – so this story will be rough, really rough, but I thrive on this impromptu stuff so … there you go. 🙂 Thanks for reading!


Welcome Home

“So there you are,” an attractive woman, her light brown hair perfectly lacquered in place, her dusty pink lipstick professionally applied, her light denim jacket and khaki slacks wrinkle-free, sat down beside her.

Alecia suddenly felt grubby and rumpled. She’d had a chance to take a rare shower and comb her hair, she hadn’t had time to actually fix it, so her long black hair was pulled back into a ponytail. Though her clothes were clean, they looked like she had left them in the dryer too long and then just grabbed them in a hurry to dress.

Which is exactly what happened, actually.

“Hello Margie,” Alecia said with a warm smile and leaned in close so the woman could give her a soft kiss on the cheek. “Have a seat. I think we still have a while to wait until Carter’s plane gets here.”

Alecia’s mother-in-law sat down beside her and wiggled her fingers at the baby. “Hello sugar pie.” Lisa kicked so hard at the sight of her grandma that the bottle slipped from her mouth. A small amount of milk worked it’s way out from between her lips and dribbled down her chin.

“Oopsie,” Alecia said and leaned to rip a cloth out of the side of the diaper bag. She swiftly cleaned off the baby’s chin before offering the bottle to Lisa once more.

“You’re getting quite good at juggling several things at once,” Margie said with a smile.

“No thanks to you.”

Margie waved her words aside and settled back into her seat. She took a moment to look out across the crowded room before saying, “There are a lot of people here, today.”

“That’s what I thought, too. I’m guessing there are a lot of military personnel coming home today.”

Margie continued to look straight ahead, but Alecia knew she was being watched, nonetheless. “So, are you nervous?”

She knew what she was talking about. Not so much the fact that she hadn’t seen her husband in ten months, she was more excited than nervous about seeing him, but she was nervous about presenting him with his daughter for the first time. How would Lisa react? Would she shy away from him because he was a stranger? Even though that was a real possibility, Alecia’s heart twisted at the thought that that might hurt her husband’s feelings.

Picturing that scene in her mind, she didn’t trust herself to speak without releasing a sob, so she simply nodded in response.

Margie patted her on the knee. “He is going to be so excited to see you two, Alecia.”

Alecia smiled and took the now empty bottle from Lisa’s mouth. She wiped her daughter’s face clean before tossing the cloth over her shoulder and lifting Lisa for a burp. “Where’s Vince?”

Margie’s smile faded and she reached out a hand to stroke her granddaughter’s fist.
“This is … not a good day for him.”

“I’m so sorry,” Alecia said while continuing to lightly pat Lisa’s back. “What have the doctors said?”

“It’s,” Margie paused, visibly swallowed and regained control of her emotions before continuing, “It’s just a matter of time.”


So, the winner of this book?

A Year of Absence: Six women’s stories of courage, hope and love by Jessica Redmond

Carolyn!!! Congratulations!!

Two people left comments for this book:

Carolyn and Alessandra. Thank you ladies!!

I know this is moving fast – sorry about that!! But that’s how a blog-a-thon works. I hope you can keep up with me! I’m having a BLAST trying to keep my head above water and I’m writing this story as I go along, so WHEW! It’s been quite a challenge! And just think, I have another 18 hours to go!!

Stay with me … you’ll have a chance to win another book shortly!

2 thoughts on “Blog-a-thon ’08: Welcome Home [4]”

  1. Aww, you’re so sweet, Carolyn! Thank you!!! I’ll need the company! Right now, I’m like a jack-in-the-box, getting up, putting a load of laundry in, sitting down, checking posts, getting up, making the boys lunch, sitting down …

    Up, down, up, down …

    My legs are going to get a workout! LOL

  2. Whoo hoooo!! Thank you!!!

    I wanna go home. I want to keep up with you. Just 3 more trucks to go:) (quarterly report stuff — all the miles and fuel the drivers have done over the last quarter. In my perfect world, this would get done on a weekly basis. But. Life happens. So, here i am, I’ve worked until 6-7:00 every night, trying to get a few trucks done each night. And i had 6 trucks left to do this morning.

    You are my carrot to keep going. WHEN I’m done, I can go home, and do some catching up, and then start up current with your posts. Right now, its just hit and miss. I do a truck, and then come see ya:)

    I see the light at the end of the tunnell.

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